more dong than ding

I'm not too sure about this. After painting it in watercolour it looked a little flat, definitely in need of some oomph. So a punchier colour palette has been attempted and I think it's one to walk away from at the moment.

 Working for any length of time on one image gets you a little blinkered, I think. I need to post something else quickly to take my mind of it. Or just take it off.